托福寫作最不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)的四種開頭方式

俗話說得好，“題好文一半”，對于托?？荚嚂r的寫作，一個好的開頭的重要性不言而喻。大家都希望能通過一個好的開頭，成功吸引考官的注意，使他對你的作文有個好的第一印象。當(dāng)然，如果你的開頭十分糟糕，它便能夠“完美”地禍害這次托福寫作考試。下面，就讓阿卡索一對一外教網(wǎng)的托福輔導(dǎo)老師為各位考生總結(jié)的四種最不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)的四種開頭方式，順便分享一下阿卡索外教網(wǎng)的免費(fèi)試聽地址：http://m.cn-hb.com.cn/lps/content/ystf_test.htm?search=350982

一、廢話連篇 急煞讀者

失敗案例：

Topic --Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. I am very interested in talking about the topic. Because I am also a college student and I am not married……

修改方案：開門見山 直奔主題

In my opinion, it isn’t a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

二、漸行漸遠(yuǎn) 離題千里

失敗案例：

Topic---It is said that nowadays one can’t acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

I think, to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

三、觀點(diǎn)不明 態(tài)度曖昧

失敗案例：

Topic--Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

四、中式英語 人見人跪

失敗案例：

Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there。

Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chop when I go out buy things……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a person always does bad things, he will get “baoying”。

上面總結(jié)的四種托?？荚?/a>技巧方式就是托福寫作中最經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的糟糕方式，讓人讀之無味，興趣索然。希望大家在訓(xùn)練托福寫作時多加注意，要避免出現(xiàn)這些方式。同時，阿卡索外教網(wǎng)提供專業(yè)的托?？荚噷ｍ?xiàng)輔導(dǎo)，包括針對詞匯、聽力、口語、閱讀和寫作各部分的定制課程，由有多年托福培訓(xùn)經(jīng)驗(yàn)的優(yōu)秀老師進(jìn)行一對一培訓(xùn)。